|I don't think this is a bad drawing, |
but the author would have liked it.
Like, hilariously bad.
Plan 9 From Outer Space bad.
It soon achieved immortality on the SF convention circuit, where group readings became de rigeur.
You can find it here.
Why do I suggest this, besides some innocent merriment? Because it's a superb category of mistakes. Not just in using the wrong word, or the wrong punctuation, but the wrong metaphor, the wrong simile, the wrong construction, and on, and on - it's fractally wrong, wrong on every level.
If you read this and don't see the wrong, then you've a ways to go in your own writing quest, my fellow scribe.